Reflective Production Diary- finished article

Changes continued

New article layout-

The article is much more professional in its layout and structure. i have kept the black background because it has allowed the text and pictures to stand out and is a good color as it is neutral. it also contrasts with the white. I have overlapped the pictures which are posed in three entirely different ways and subheadings are used to allow the reader to familiarize themselves with the artist.


Old article layout-

The article has hugely improved from this. Some grammatical errors have been corrected from this and a centre fold has been placed within my article now. Although, i liked the layout i feel that it did not match with a music magazine convention. Moreover, if this was done as a proper magazine article, text and images would be missed out due to there being no gap within the two A4 pages. Furthermore, even though i liked to integrate the color purple in the article i feel that it brought the audience eye on the images more than the full article. Additionally, when the layout of the text is totally unconventional There is no heading to show that this is an article, the text starts to far up and the 'Q&A' part has big gaps throughout.